Blackrose

This chapter sort of continues from chapter one so you might want to read that first, or at least skim through it. A loud knock at the door made Leila's ...

Hey, a follow Novice here, Just like Kaedee, I think this piece has lots of potential and the only problem it has is the description. If you chuck in a ...

I reviewed your forward piece and completely loved it. This time you haven't got as much description, but it can be hard to fit description in when your story is ...

READ THIS FIRST!! SORRY FOR MY TYPO'S!! Firstly: It shouldn't of been "Leila shock her head" it should of been "Leila shook her head" Secondly: There is an "AS" somewhere ...

Thank you to everyone who reviewed my beginning piece. I completely rewrote it and added a hold load of description. I hope this is much better, please tell me if ...

Wow. Nice description of the girl. It creates a great image. You should write some more like that. It is hard to describe the character if they speak in first ...

Hey, I love the whole idea. It looks great. But there's always something nit picky, isn't there. O.K. First of all, like the review before me, you need to break ...

O.k, I tried to write a comic book once about two years ago, but I gave up cause I found out books are more my thing. If you haven't found ...

O.k. I can definitely see why you don't have many reviews for this peice. Its Crazy. Is it even fantasy? I don't know. I didn't read it all cause it's ...

Nice KitxKat, for someone who doesn't write poetry it's good. What film were you watching? X BlackRose X

Heya, I like the idea's you have going on here. It really has some potential. When I read it the main thing that stood out was the characters. The girl, ...

O.k. So this is only the begin part of my book and there isn't any fantasy in it yet, but I find it so hard to start of a decent ...

Hiya, my names Bex and at the moment I'm 15 years old. I love writing and have been trying to find a decent writers website for ages, so when I ...