Blackrose

Welcome to YWS!! You'll love it here!! I've never done one of these before so it could be...errr...interesting, Inside YWS I'm Blackrose, outside of YWS I'm just Bex, I'm 15 ...

Heya ShadowChic!! So you went with ShadowChic, huh? Great idea. I'm glad you decided to join up. Anyway, I see you almost every day but I just thought I'd post ...

Heya Loony! :D You seem bubbly and enthusiastic! We like that here. You should have posted more up about yourself!! Anyway, im Blackrose, or any other shortened form of that. ...

I don't have a name for this one yet but I'm thinking of calling it Guardian Angel or something along that line. This idea popped into my head while I ...

Wow, for only the first part of a chapter and the intro this is very good. You definatly hook the reader and that's what's important in a first chapter. But, ...

Heya! This is definatly a different kind of fantasy! I love it though. Ofcourse there are some little nitpicks that I must coment on. So... She sighed and sat on ...

This is chapter four. Hope you like it and please review it!! 8) The grounds were deserted. To quiet for anyones liking. The girls had crept through the corridors, making ...

Heya, This is a really great idea, but like Kiwi said before me it isn't much of a prologue. It would be good if you did the prologue about the ...

Heya Storm, This was a brilliant piece. You describe beautifully, better then anything I've read so far on YWS. You have talent. But, like borntobe said, you have room to ...

I have to say that it's kind of creepy how common you at the character seem. Is she described how you look because that would be even wierder! I love ...

Hey, welcome to YWS! You'll love it here. You certainally have major potential and you ain't afraid to show it. That's really good, shows your a good author. As always, ...

Chapter Three: After a short discussion, Leila was persuaded into letting Lucy come with her to the woods. The girls decided to go later that day at eleven o'clock, when ...

Heya Roal, O.K, well it seems like a perfectly good idea. I love it when writers give their settings cool names like Awa. However, the nit picks are what I'm ...

Hi, BlackRose here X I like the whole idea and where your taking the story but one thing stood out to me the most. Description. When you describe something it ...

Heya. It was a brilliant piece of writing and it left me asking a lot of questions. I love your choice of name by the way! Very different and suits ...