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Re: Child of One - Chapter 1
Wow! Lots of praise and good constructive criticism. I realize now the info-dumping is a real problem. Also the storyline is a bit unorganized in later chapters as I decided ...
Apr 30, 2009 -
Re: Viruses Vs. Spysweepers
And then Linus went through the battle field, completely unaffected. Just kidding. I like the surrealism of the story, though I think it could use some beefing up. Currently I ...
Apr 5, 2009