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You've certainly got a way with words in this poem. I loved all of them and how used them, and though most poems will have cliche rhymes you can predict, ...

I kind of always found heroines annoying o.o. They always throw in some girl romance things, so the heroine is never as strong as she should be. You have to ...

Well, I would say all you need to do is practice. You can't really get professional without any criticism, showing you where you went wrong in your writing. It's better ...