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thanks for the review! I'll get to these edits when I get a chance :)

you're the best, thanks!

thanks so much for the review! and yes, as far as the plot goes and my MC being the heroine, you pretty much have it spot on. The word "iffen" ...

thanks for the review! :)

Oh, and as for "wilfed," I first read that word in a book series when I was younger. I haven't heard it anywhere else, so it could potentially be a ...

I thank you once more for giving me such an in-depth review! And, as always, everything you pick out is on point. Their romance going too fast has been a ...

thanks for another of your excellent reviews! It amazes me all the little things (or big things) I miss that you point out, that should seem so obvious! There is ...

Again, I thank you so much for such an in-depth review!! I'll get to work on these errors right away. also on a side note, Yanko's use of "melady" instead ...

thank you so much for this review!! it is hands down the most helpful one I have gotten. I definitely see the issues with everything you pointed out, so I ...

Thank you for pointing out that the gypsy man showed no concern for his wife! His countenance makes total sense in my head but I guess I forgot that the ...

I definitely see what you mean about the "epicness." The way I wrote this chapter is a bit droll. Hmm... I shall think on this. And it's funny you say ...

thanks for the review! sorry I didn't respond to this sooner, I was sucked into the black hole that is school and missed it. I really appreciate all the advice ...

Okay, I can definitely see how the opening paragraph is over the top lol. Maybe I'll reserve parts of it for a different scene. Since you didn't read the other ...

lmao "shucks I'm just so hot". Love it.

thank you, I really appreciate it :)