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Another great review :) Please believe me when I say I really am trying to fix all these problems you keep pointing out, and I am learning A LOT from ...

Your reviews are never useless! I take everything you say very seriously and work tirelessly to redeem my writing to your standards :) Please know I appreciate all the hard ...

Thanks for reviewing! I may message you at some point in the near future about how to improve on some of these things that keep getting pointed out to me, ...

Again, thanks for the awesome review! I am starting to notice a pattern with what the big problems in my writing are, thanks to you and Meerkat, and as such ...

Thanks! And don't worry about not getting to my other chapters yet, I'm slammed with studying for finals this week and next and writing/editing is the very last thing on ...

Sorry, I didn't mean for that to sound so callous. I do value your reviews :)

You give such great reviews, I love them! As much as I love writing, I'm a wildlife bio major, not writing, so it's great to find someone who knows a ...

updated! please look it over when you get the chance.

Use of the Oxford comma is really up to the writer to decide. I try not to use it unless I have to because I feel that excessive commas are ...

Yeah, the prostitute was a new thing for me that I kind of added spur of the moment. I'm trying to make this story as realistic/time period accurate as possible, ...

Thanks! At least someone enjoys it lol :) Overall, there will be very little sexual/seductive content in my novel, but I will warn you that chapter 2.2 has a couple ...

Thank you for the review!

Thank you so much for the review! I'm actually in the middle of fixing this chapter. Meerkat gave me a good review and I was hoping to update this chapter ...

Wow, this was a really great review. Thank you! This was all stuff I needed to hear, since no one else really said it, and I will definitely be making ...

thanks for the advice! I didn't know the 60% rule of thumb about dialogue tags - learn something new everyday :) and yes this is one of my more clunky ...