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Thank you! I will hopefully be posting chapter three within the next few days :)

Thank you!

Thanks for the tips!

The translation is literally right underneath the spell itself.

No, I can take reviews and constructive criticism just fine. But from my point of view, your entire review came off as "I don't like this, so it's wrong." Therefore, ...

If you don't like my stuff, then don't read it. That simple.

Thank you! I will definitely work on the descriptions bit, and DEFINITELY let you know when I post more.

Thank you for your review! It's the little stuff that's the hardest to notice, so I appreciate you taking your time for it. And yes, I will definitely keep you ...

Hey, thanks for the review! I don't get many chances to get on here during the summer so I haven't been able to take this one down yet, as I'm ...

Thanks again! And I'll make sure to keep you posted :)

Thanks for the tips, I really appreciate them!

Thanks for the review! On the subject of names: Too each their own I suppose. As a reader, I personally get bored with names that aren't more fantasy-ish.

Thank you! I actually have more chapters posted for this story, but I am currently going back through them and making some drastic changes in spots, so I threw this ...

Alright I don't want to give too much away since it will be explained in later chapters, but I'll try to help clarify: So Kaenok and Rana are the immortal ...

thanks for the review :)