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Sorry, I thought I replied to this before but I guess I forgot to. Thank you for the review! All tips are helpful and I appreciate them :)

Thank you for the review! It's really helpful :)

Thank you! I really appreciate the advice!

Thank you for the review! Every little thing gives me insight on how to improve my writing :)

Thank you!

They are, thank you!

Thank you!

Thanks again! I appreciate every review I get and take everything into consideration.

thank you for the review! :)

Thank you for the review! I will get to these fixes as soon as I can :)

Again, good tips, I'll try and fix things soon. Thanks!

Thanks for the tips! I will check it out :)

Good points about adding why Rana's angry in the beginning, and noting the difference in time between when their children were taken away versus this chapter. I thought I had ...

Thanks for the tips! :)

I took your advice too, and rearranged some things so I could add more to the end of this chapter. Please check it out :D