Bittersweet

Hey, Blackie Chan! :D So. Looking at the picture, it's a good hand! There's just a few things that could have been fixed to make it look a little more ...

Eee! *eats cookies* Now. Onto the review. This was an awesome way to start the novel, methinks. And it is nowhere near as bad as you seem to think it ...

I feel like I've been posting in the art section too much... *cough* Anyway. This one's name is Elena. It started out as a photo June suggested for me to ...

Hey Kelly! I'm here, just as I promised! I'm going to go through all the mistakes here first, before I get into the overall review. Not once had it been ...

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Yay, chapter 4! So, I'm sure you don't want too many nitpicks, but I still have a few to bring up. For instance, you do a lot of the "T-talking ...

Me and my friend Amber started to work on this, not really expecting it to be much. But then it turned out to be quite the project! Amber did the ...

Hello Moo! I have returned to review some of your work once again! So, first, I'll go through and find the minor mistakes throughout the story. Don't be alarmed by ...

You get... William Shakespeare! In a compact, travel-sized form! *inserts coin*

"Ooh, English Muffins!" I will no proceed to go make myself some toast... >_>

My novel-in-progress Bittersweet I've worked on since the summer of 2006. Currently, it's a 170 pages, but I can't ever seem to bring myself to write it. The beginning is ...

Poor Snoink! :P I can't believe people would apply like that... It's quite pathetic!

Hello again! :D Reading this, contrary to Lauren, I think I liked it a little less than second installment, though it's still very good. I guess I just feel as ...

Why hello there, Sela! We meet again! I suppose I liked your first chapter so much I decided to review this one too. :) So, yes, the exposition has unraveled ...

Hello there Sela! I see you've gotten quite a lot of reviews, but I hope you have room for a little more. :P I love to give my two-cents worth. ...