Bittersweet

Hey Conrad! I'm the second judge for the CIA contest, as I believe I told you a long time ago. Anyway, on with the review! I love the abruptness of ...

Here I am, the second judge for the CIA contest! Anyway, I'll proceed. I didn't find many mistakes except for maybe a misplaced comma here and there. But I won't ...

I have arrived with the second complimentary critique that you get for entering the February 2009 CIA contest! So let's get started, shall we? As he walked out of the ...

TEAGUE: Wait, hold on, I need a coat. It's eighty degrees in here. I laughed out loud at that part! Teague needs to live on like... Jupiter. xD I hope ...

Okay, I edited it a little and added another stanza. It still needs more work, though. ______ The oceans were once painted gold, full of hope and wonder. What has ...

Heather, I'm jealous! I wish I had a swanky bookcase. :p Dudette, you and your friend are goons! You're so pretty though! Love the outfit.

Thank you, loves! :) Monki, you do have amazing eyes! You could blind someone with those! And Heather, what's the occasion? Snazzy! Also... that bookcase is amazing. -Holly

It's been a while since I've posted here! I forgot how lovely everyone is. I'm wearing the beautiful necklace June gave me! -Holly

Hey, Lize! I'm Holly. You could call me by my username if you wish, but I prefer real names. :P And speaking of names, yours is awesome! Well, both of ...

*raises hand* I do believe I have most logical explanation. Ahem. A group of bad boys at high school had always enjoyed pranking the old grumpy teacher Mr. Robson. After ...

Hey, Rosey! I'm the guest judge for the February 2009 CIA contest! This is the first complimentary critique out of two that comes along with entering the contest. The other ...

Freja! That's such a beautiful name! I've never known anyone with it before. My name's rather common. I'm Holly. If you don't want to call me that, you can call ...

Hey, Phyx! I'm Bittersweet, though being called by my birth name. So I'd prefer Holly versus Bittersweet. But if that doesn't strike your fancy, you can call me Bitters or ...

Hey, threm! :D You're from the Philippines, eh? That's so cool! What language do you speak? My brother lived in the Philippines for two years, so I know quite a ...

Hello Caleb! I'm Bittersweet, though I prefer being called by my real name; Holly. But you could call me Bitters, or the most popular: BS. ;) You sound like you ...