Bittersweet

Thou canst taketh away my Hannah from me, O Kylan! *whisks Hannah away and off into the sunset* In other words, you're too great of a poet to be human, ...

I just barely finished this. It's given me a good deal of frustration, but the ending outcome was far better than I'd hoped! If you notice anything wonky or wrong, ...

Hey Shoaib! I notice you are new, so welcome to YWS! There are a few things I'd like to touch on in this poem: -Capitalization -Punctuation -Rhyming scheme So let's ...

Hey, Cat! I noticed this only had one review, and I certainly think it deserves more than that! So here I have come to save the day! Hooray! “Lin! Oh, ...

I have arrived for the last review! Hooray! So let's get started! I shifted in my seat as I turned my attention to the TV screen. An orange woman smiled ...

Hello Dudette! Sorry it took me so long to get to this one. I've been immensely busy. But I've come at last! Anyhow, I was too lazy to read the ...

My sweet, fair child, what has become of you? You have collapsed into my hands once again, but, my child, who are you? You bleak, pale creature of the darkness… ...

Hello Dudette! Thanks so much for requesting me for the reviews! Congratulations on winning the CIA contest, by the way. Well, let's get started, shall we? “That’ll be £2.30 then ...

I didst not get thine poll. Thus. "No". -Holly

Huzzah! I hast read all thine fair poems, m'lady! My favourite thus far is Daybreak because it's simple and full of loveliness. And To Eden . As I already told ...

Hello! This was a spontaneous review; I hadn't been planning on reviewing anything. But I really enjoyed your story and felt that I should put in my two cents! I ...

Hey, Jared! I don't have a whole lot to say, but we'll see how the review turns out, no? ____the procession drum, drum, drums on I, personally, think this would ...

I’m forever moving; pirouetting across the world. Tiptoeing over lives, I sing idyllic melodies. I sing crashing refrains. Through a sea shell you can hear me, ringing in your ear. ...

Hello ClimberSquirrel! I've arrived to give you your second complimentary review for the February CIA contest! So let's get started, shall we? Reading through this, I'm quite amazed at the ...

Hey Ally! I'm here for the second of two complimentary reviews for the February CIA contest! I won't nitpick much, since Jen has appeared to have covered that, but I'll ...