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Re: Rose of The West (pt. 2)
I have returned! So let us proceed with the review. So here, Ronnie gets up: Then he slowly got up and walked over to the window. and then a paragraph ...
Jul 9, 2009 -
Re: Rose of The West (pt. 1)
Hey Kylan and Conrad! I was only just going to read this (shame on me!) but your lack of reviews on this made me decide otherwise. So here I am. ...
Jul 8, 2009 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here [6]
Ashli! What are you talking about? You seriously don't need make up. You're so pretty! :) Vonika! What a coincidence! I saw you on DeviantArt before and now YWS. Your ...
Jul 6, 2009 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here [6]
-Holly
Jul 6, 2009 -
Re: Absalom, my son
I felt like there should be some kind of meaning, rather than "Name him Juan." I lol'd at that. I just imagined that long pause, his hand on her belly, ...
Jun 19, 2009 -
Re: Elizabeth
First I'd like to thank you all for your compliments and criticism. I did notice a ton of things that I hadn't noticed before, thanks to you guys. I would ...
Jun 9, 2009 -
Re: Carolina Drama
Hey, I'm Holly. You probably don't know me. xD Anyway, I saw the title of this piece of work and I was like "The Raconteurs!" I love them to pieces. ...
Jun 9, 2009 -
Re: of emeralds and rubies
Gurlfrand's review makes me laugh. xD But anyway. I noticed that you posted this on Facebook so I came to review it here. The problem with this poem is that ...
Jun 8, 2009 -
Re: She's a Fairytale
Hey Catlin! Here to review, just like a promised. So let's get started! :D Her golden hair bounced I don't like that you throw out this description in the second ...
May 30, 2009 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here [6]
Crysi! D: That dress is so adorable! And thanks, Lauren. :)
May 30, 2009 -
Re: HAPPY BIRTHDAY, NATEY-POO!
I hope you have the best birthday that ever lived. Seriously. You deserve it, Nate. :D -Holly
May 29, 2009 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here [6]
There's me. I was having fun on Photobucket. The stars are probably a little too much. xD Adam- you play piano!?!? You just increased 1,000,000,000,000 in cool points. Also, I ...
May 29, 2009 -
Re: Afternoon Missions
Holly has arrived, here as promised! I shan't hesitate to begin. Lucky for you, there won't be too many nitpicks because I didn't find a whole lot of things to ...
May 28, 2009 -
Re: These little things...
Holly has arrived with a lovely 50-pointer review on your lovely two-lined poem! I shall begin with the nitpicks. outnumber the stars Though I think this is a good comparison, ...
May 26, 2009 -
Re: Tip for critiquers...
Heh. Suzanne saw that and immediately thought of YWS. xD She was writing a paper, thus, too busy to post it on YWS herself. -Holly
May 21, 2009