Bittersweet

I understand you are from another culture, but you get your plurals and things like that wrong. Besides that, I really really like your poem. It's powerful, unique and beautiful. ...

I totally agree with Alexis*the*person. I thought you were talking about marriage. I was confused until the very last line. But I feel it really doesn't go deep. I don't ...

It's very Twilightesque. That's not always a bad thing, but I think that it's a bit over-the-top Twilight-like. I feel like the characters aren't original. I feel like the whole ...

Shimmering

A tall person with fiery orange hair and gray eyes. I don't know. lol.

This was practically the first poem I've written in a looooonnnnnng time.

Large blue eyes open wide behold this world so new. Not knowing if it's good or bad how vast is this strange view? Her face is red and ugly, everyone ...

It is a very powerful poem. I like the stanza that talks about the bird and the plane. Because it is a saying that everyone knows, it makes it very ...

t's windy. It’s always windy in New Mexico. Dirt pelts like tiny bullets into my face, hair flying around madly. I look around at my desert surroundings that are so ...

Hey hey hey! It's FAT ALBERT! Ahem. Anyway, I'm 13. I began writing when I was 6 and now I can pretty much get high off of it. I've written ...