Bittersweet

Wow. That's a little... eerie. I like it a lot though (it just kind of creeps me out). Just Serenade me in my sleep Serenade doesn't need to be capitalized. ...

Wowza. This is wonderful. It's so good because I know you really felt this while writing it. Why do we run and hide? Sometimes I just wish everyone could know ...

Hello again! Okay, well I've noticed that you definitely have the potential to be a really great poet. You have a certain... cleverness is the word I want to say, ...

Hey there! -waves- I find this poem reasonably good. The thing that bugs me is that it kind of confusing. My one crooked finger Okay, is he like Cap'n Hook ...

Psh. Everyone knows Toothpicks are cooler than anything else on the list. (except for YWS, but how do phones and YWS go together? Mmhmm. That's what I thought.) TOOTHPICKS RULE ...

Sometimes I feel incomplete. Often, it feels like a big chunk of my world broke off and floated away to make its own peaceful, quiet place. But now there are ...

#1 Biggest Fan, here! :D Well, I must say, I quite enjoyed this piece--first of all, because I relate to Raymond, with his musical-ness. I play the piano as well, ...

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Hullo there! Er, I didn't really read all of the other reviews, so if I repeat something they say, sorry. The smell of screams. The smell of dying men and ...

HAHAHAHA! Nice! I can't really review this, but I can say it made me laugh. Especially the bard. He's my favorite. You many have already seen this video on YouTube, ...

Eeeh! I have to know who that guy is now! Anywhoo, you've definitely created a nice prologue. I always believe that a prologue should be at least one of these, ...

Er... 5/10 Totally confused... who is coming?

GAH! Stupid mother!!! -feels like slapping Fat Boy's mom- She's such a jerkface! Okay, now I feel absolutely horrible for Fat Boy. The poor kid has too much pain for ...

Awe... I feel so terrible for him. The mom! She's so... she's such a jerk! Grrrr! Poor Fat Boy... Anywhoo, of all of previous entries, this is my favorite. You ...

Well, how could I not leave a comment when Fat Boy is begging me to? I really really like your style. It's so... well, I relate to it. I'm not ...