Bittersweet

Hee hee. I think Nate forgot to mention to gorgeousness of places like Moab. Small towns, but the desert colors are amazing. -sigh- I wish I could move back there.

Utah is the most awesomest of places, Nate. And lots of Mormons. xD

This is a very good piece of writing. I didn't find any mistakes and such excapt for just one part that kind of disrupted the flow: His accent was beautiful, ...

Outside the window, the city was a turbulent sea of movement. Bustling merchants sold their goods from behind shaded stands and fair women looped their arms in their husbands’, strolling ...

Hullo, there! -waves- I'm going to dive into the mistakes first: I, Persephone, who was the bringing forth of life in spring, I who stood among the powerful and the ...

Oooh! I like this poem a lot! Sorry, this is kind of a pointless review, but I found no mistakes or anything., and I wanted say at least something. It's ...

9/10! I find it quite funny that your boyfriend would say that. xD

Wow! You're an excellent writer! I must say I know exactly what goes on in a creepy stalker/madman's mind now. Hee hee. Anyway, I love your descriptions. They are very ...

Hiya! First I'm going to dive into my issues with this: -What's with Michael? I mean, I know he's there to explain these things, but I feel like he's kind ...

Sorry, October, but this doesn'tto be shortened! It's perfecto! Anywhoo, Ringo, this is by far my favorite of all of your poems. So rich and lovely with words. It's reads ...

Hullo there! This story is kind of heartwrenching. Don't worry, the good kind, I mean. I've never known or loved anyone blind, but I feel a very deep respect and ...

Hello there! -waves enthusiastically- I'm Bittersweet (Bitter, Sweet, Bit, Bitta, whatever you choose)! Welcome to YWS! You'll have loads of fun here. I'm pretty new too, but you learn really ...

Hullo BlackMirror! Welcome to YWS. You're going to have LOADS of fun here. It's quite addicting, actually. Hee hee. I fairly newish here too, but you learn super fast. Anywhoo, ...

These things always giggle. Mostly because I'm a romantic and a writer, and I relate to these kinds of things. Anywhoo, nothing I have to say about this piece is ...

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