Bittersweet

Hiya, Sam! I enjoyed this part quite a lot! The last time he’d slept like that, he’d woken up tangled in his French teacher. I find this confusing. I think ...

Eeeh! Sumi, why the heck are you not happy with this? I can't get enough of your descriptions. They are lovely! This part wasn't quite as tell-y as the last ...

Hiya there! Welcome to YWS! I'm Bitter, Bitta, Sweet, or Holly, whatever! As for the story, here are some small corrections: Due to the graphic nature of the account, those ...

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Funny, but I didn't find this "cracktastic" at all. xD It is... unique, but that's what I loved. I've never read anything told like this, and I'm very curious about ...

Eeeh! This is excellent, Ringo! You have such a clever, deep, and sophisticated way to put words into poems. I respect you for that one, dude. 8) I only found ...

Inspired by the dreamy Norwegian rockstar Sondre Lerche and his song "On The Tower". Here's the link to the song on YouTube. It's just some stupid video some put together ...

Hello there, Jclifton! I'm gonna dive into the boring stuff first: “I rather dislike it when you try and peek at my cards, Mr. Strithington,” said Julius Rudd. His eyes, ...

Oh wow. That's extremely suspenseful. I was hooked from the beginning, and by the end I was like "Oh holy crap!" Anyway, as always, your writing is very believable. I ...

Hello there! I really liked this poem. It is very frank and cute, maybe a little cheesy (but cheesy can be good). One thing I must say though is that ...

After the confusion, here I am, reading your story. Sorry it took me a while. I've been having a hard time getting to it. Anyway, first I'm going to all ...

Okay, I love all of those! Ah! So hard to choose. 80's had some great great music, 90's had some great rock. The present has some good stuff too... but ...

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Hullo Jared! JFW stole everything I was going to correct. -eye spasm- So I'll just go to the praise/comments stuff right now. I was laughing the whole first part. I ...

Psh, you guys are losers! You both just know that Jennafina would come to me under all circumstances! Bah-hah! Lowly peasants! You are not worthy of me or Jennafina! I ...