Bittersweet

1) When did you join YWS? May 8th 2008, I believe. 2) Did you try out any other writing sites before you joined YWS? Not really, just took a quick ...

Areida! My goodness! You are so very pretty. I wish I could steal your eyes. And your smile is lovely! And haven't you heard, dahling, pale is the new tan! ...

10/10! It's lovely!

Hiya Michael! Overall, nice poem! You kept to mood of the poem very consistent and it was easy to see how the narrator feels. I have some nitpicks first, though, ...

Hallelujah! I'm glad it's beginning to get more strict. If only we could make proper punctuation and grammar a rule too.

I can certainly tell who it is! Don't cry. :P I don't think Robert's eyes are quite so large though. He has fairly small eyes, so you may want to ...

Sorry if I took someone's, I only took the time to read a few. -You know you're a writer when the littlest thing brings that soft urge and twitch in ...

I agree with Jonny Von Jelly. I think a balance (or at least some people of different sexes. It doesn't have to be 50% guys and 50% girls. That's weird) ...

Ahh, Sarah, your avatar is gorgeous! Is it from something? 10/10

Mechanical. Because who wants to get up and sharpen their pencil every two seconds? xD

I am truly jealous, Snoink. Your shirt is amazing. :P

I love my room! I would take a picture but seriously, I can barely see the floor... O.o But yeah, it has periwinkle walls and my bedspread is the same ...

Green eyes is fine. :)

A girl was considered pretty for several things; pale, unblemished skin, fashionable curls, and womanly figure. She didn't have to have blonde hair and blue eyes to be considered pretty. ...

I had no idea that was even possible! LOL. -dies of laughter- -Holly