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  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Lifetime of a Raindrop

    The radio is humming in the kitchen, too far away to hear the words being spoken. The sound wafts from the open door and makes its way through the living ...

    Sep 11, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Dust

    In my English class, we read the poem "Abandoned Farmhouse" by Ted Kooser. We were told to mimic the poem using things in/around our house to describe us. This is ...

    Aug 22, 2010
  • General Fiction Novels Re: The Séance Revival (The Ouija Board)

    Jared! I only skimmed over the reviews briefly, so I may sound like a skipping record. Just saying. It was my sixteenth birthday, and my friend Sam had given me ...

    Aug 13, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: mirrors reflecting mirrors (edited)

    Kitrosemon13: I did, in fact, mean perch. Also, this wasn't intended to have any sort of rhyme.Thanks for the review! I changed some small things as you suggested. Annapapadimitriou123: Thank ...

    Aug 2, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: mirrors reflecting mirrors (edited)

    I see the world through a window warped; through glass enfeebled by old age, as a wilting woman with a wrinkled spine. The figures sliding past are broken little things. ...

    Aug 2, 2010
  • Lounge, The Re: Post Your Pic Here [7]

    Wow. Rogaine really DOES work! It also helped a ton with your complexion. You look like you got a bit more sun! *nods* -Holly

    Jun 23, 2010
  • Lounge, The Re: Post Your Pic Here [7]

    ... Shepherd... your eyes. They are mesmerizing! My friend and I decided to go out and do a bit of a photo shoot together. I was the photographer/editor, so I ...

    Jun 22, 2010
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hello - read it,or the evil unicorns will eat you

    I sure hope you won't count me among the evil unicorns! ;) Oh, and that's Rosey, our evil pet unicorn. Better stay away from her... She has stabbed several new ...

    Jun 3, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: The Warmth and the Summertime / Still Wandering

    I don't really have any nitpicks, except that I wish these were bigger, especially since I can't really read the first one at all. My only real nitpick is: could ...

    Jun 3, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: The Warmth and the Summertime / Still Wandering

    Here are two of my latest paintings. Click on them to make the images full-sized. Still Wandering I did this all with an ink pen and then took a wet ...

    Jun 3, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: the five senses of sight

    omg ur lyke, so amazin. i wish i could rite liek u. :OOOOO -Holly (you asked for it.)

    May 30, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Art Finished Over the Past Year

    Hey, Faded! I don't review much nowadays (I'm such an old person...), but I enjoy looking at the Art & Photography section every now and then since that's what I ...

    May 16, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Little Blue Veins

    Thank you, everyone! Evi: As for the question you raised about his motives... you're right on all of them. Haha. In the beginning, he's running TO the place in his ...

    May 16, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Little Blue Veins

    The grit is melding to the surface of my body and slowly finding its way in. Where I licked my lips to keep them moist is now encrusted with the ...

    May 14, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Bridges

    Hey, Kylan. I know I said I'd tell you what I thought about the story later, but I figured you'd appreciate a review a bit more. Lucky you! I don't ...

    May 11, 2010


Writing is the geometry of the soul.
— Plato