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Vailin stood apart from the other warriors, fuming silently. The Prince had forbade him from taking part in the first charge, holding him back with the elites. The first major ...

*I thought we could run into Maybe and Rask at the inn* Dakto pushed the inn's door open, holding it for the others as they walked in. He looked around, ...

Michael walked back to the three point line, spinning the ball between his hands. "Well, the fire alarm's done one good thing - we'll be able to play in peace ...

***What's going on? >.>***

Count me in. I'm just finishing up a race now.

Name: Cobar Meaning: Burnt Earth Age: 3 Gender: Male Species: Dingo Description of Species: Habitat: Australia Appearance: Personality: Being larger than most dingoes, he travels alone rather than in

Michael caught the ball and straightened a little, sniffing. A vampire...and a werewolf. Interesting companions, he thought. "Me against the two of you?" he asked, looking up at last, "Or..." ...

*We're going to the village with the elves, Rain flew there on her dragon with the avian, and the others are doing a different plot right now.*

I like it, it's definately better than the first draft. Just a couple of things that could be improved. 30 seconds after the cube had been scrambled the cube looked ...

Michael stepped into the gym, basketball in one hand, duffel bag in the other. He left the bag lying by the side of the basketball court and took a shot ...

Name: Michael Race: Warlock Age: 17 Orientation: Women Eyes: Green Hair: Brown, short Height: 6'1'' Body Type: Semi-athletic Personality: Often shy and awkward, though he generally relaxes if in a ...

*They could draw on sympathists in other countries, people who think that life under the desert might be better for some reason. And they could use slaves and such as ...

Dakto walked with the others, a single spark playing across his hand. He glared at the Drake's back, still smarting with embarrassment from her petty flames. 'How easy it would ...

The Stormlord felt something moving behind him, sensitive to the slightest change in the air around him. He turned slowly, hands on his swords. He took a single step forward, ...

I like it, you should definately write more. It was at this point Emily made a terrible mistake. This should probably read at this point that Emily . adrenaline now ...