BigDaddyDawg1899

Wow you are really good at reviewing. Thank you for taking the time to do so. I actually wrote this about 3 years ago, and pulled it out of the ...

Thanks for the info. Yes, I am new and I have tryed countless times to try and figure out how to indent and post as is in word. Can't seem ...

I, Personally, did not like this. I liked your other stuff much better. But thats just me. Cant wait to see more from you though.

I watch as a single bright star shines through the mess in the sky. Venus, that's the one. The evening star, the first visible star at dusk. I sigh as ...