BigDaddyDawg1899

Thank you Lily! I have post part 3 on here. Hope you get to read it. And you are very right. Thank you for picking up on that for me! ...

Thank you so much skittles! I will change this stuff when I get home from work tonight. I did mean to put the things you were stating but after writing ...

Wow you are really good at reviewing. Thank you for taking the time to do so. I actually wrote this about 3 years ago, and pulled it out of the ...

Thanks for the info. Yes, I am new and I have tryed countless times to try and figure out how to indent and post as is in word. Can't seem ...

5. The End There has been a change of plans since I had placed the call to 911. It would take them a good 40 minutes to make it here. ...

I, Personally, did not like this. I liked your other stuff much better. But thats just me. Cant wait to see more from you though.

1. “Mommy, come quick!!” Jay Jay screamed at the top of his lungs from his tiny little bedroom on the second floor of what his parents called “the best house ...

I feel this was very well put together up until the end. I didnt like how the first person telling the story didnt even make it through a whole chapter ...

Like the name, Like the story, as short as it was. I don't really know how your supposed to rate a story that is that short. But I thought I ...

I actually liked the writing aspect of it, but didnt like the end. It could also have been a little longer, but I like really disturbing stuff like that so ...

I agree, this was a good piece of writing. It really wasnt the story that was unique, but the wat that you wrote it. I would love to read more ...

Hello there, and thanks for the post. I have to agree totally with jellybean on this. What is this aircraft? Where are they from? Anything to be a little more ...

I watch as a single bright star shines through the mess in the sky. Venus, that's the one. The evening star, the first visible star at dusk. I sigh as ...

I was pleased in reading this. Ad I first started, I was growing confused, but towards the middle I really put it together. I think you have a good plot ...

3. The Call 6:22 PM “This is 911, Can you please state the nature of your emergency?” 6:22 PM “Yes, My name is Marshall Jackson. I live at 406 BoMonte ...