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3. The Gold Digger It turns out, on June 12th on the way to the airport, Gerald actually forgot the damn passports at home. It was a good thing they ...

Hey Lily...I just read chapter 1 and I really like it! First off, let me get the nit picks out of the way. Im just gonna tell you your puctual ...

Hello again. Just thought I would check over this for you since you asked. Here it goes... O how I love this boy

This was good stuff. A few gramma errors but other than that it was nice. Keep up the good work. Maybe sometime you could review some of my work?

I agree with the above post. But this is your poem, not mine. All in all I liked it alot and look forward to reading more. Please check out my ...

Hey thanks for the review. The reason i spelled figger instead of figure is I wanted to the reader to know he talked that way, sort of red neckish. It ...

2. Justine Gerald did love his daughter. Justine Falco was a smart and beautiful young lady, who favored her mother’s looks. She had the long blonde curly hair and the ...

Good job! I liked it. Keep up the good work.

1. You could say that Gerald Falco was an unlucky man. Even the time he won two hundred fifty dollars on the two dollar scratch off lottery ticket he had ...

Bravo. Nicely done. I really liked this. I didn't catch any spelling errors, and you picked a nice choice of words. Cheers. Keep up the good work.

I really liked this. You should check out my work. I think you may like it. Keep writing!

Way way way too many commas. Good idea, just polish it up some.

Hello there. I wanted to give ya a review on your story. I usually don't read romance but gave this one a shot. Here it goes. "Ry," I started to ...

Your story was good. I am always a sucker for the monster in the closet. I am not going to go though and tell you your punctual errors and spelling ...

Your pictures are indeed beautiful. I agree that the first 2 are out of focus, but i personally like the effect and the character it gives to the pictures. The ...