BigDaddyDawg1899

2. Hecto S. Akiyaba, also known as Osama by Gerald and Justine, sat in the much too tiny seat in the third row in the coach section. After he had ...

Hello and thank you for the review! I agree with you on what you said. I love all feedback. This only took an hour to write today, so I knew ...

My Dead Husband’s Mother’s Day Present By BT Musselman “I’m sorry Mom, I can’t do it this time,” Lynn said to her mother. “I just had to take out a ...

I am a horror fan, and this is not horror. It was decent and a little suspensful, but you need to clean it up some and make some improvements to ...

All that I have to say is you are verrrryy talented to be able to do this freehand without resources, and they are both awesome! First is my fav. Good ...

Aloha! I do like these pics alot. I liked the coffee cup picture the best, because everything just seemed to fit together. Other 2 were nice, but the were not ...

This piece was decent, but rather short. I think you should revise and make a little longer. Good idea though. Please check out some of my stuff sometime! Cheers and ...

Im not much into poetry but I gave this a shot. I really liked this line. There the road to Jerusalem, stumbling down to be forgiven of sin,The Knights Templar ...

Okay so I liked the idea of this tory, but it needs to be re read and some editing. I seen a couple of placed you doubled words, and you ...

Hello there. First off, I was to say good job on the descriptive writing. I think you did a very good job. One thing I did find a bit annoying ...

I thought this was a good beginning. Good work on getting detail in there! I like it. You have a few grammar problems and you use commas where they dont ...

Chapter 4 1. First Class Justine was more than excited about her life-long dream of going to France finally coming true. There was still one added surprise for Justine that ...

Thank you for the review, but it would have been nice to see these occurances you are talking about. Maybe then I could change it, but to me I feel ...

LOL yeah I can see what you mean, but osama will appear later in the book...this chapter was about introducing you to "The gold digger" and to put humor into ...

Hi and thanks! Basically, I put the part about him being robbed by clyde for 2 reasons. 1, I wanted the reader to have a demonstration of a time when ...