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  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Short Story

    A Girl Named Alice Once Mum had died, there was nothing else to live for. We fell apart without her; Dad, Lexi and I. Mum had always been the one ...

    Sep 3, 2009
  • Fantasy Novels Re: The Ever Trail - Part 1

    Hey. I liked this, though I found the writing a bit hard to understand sometimes, because it was so poetic that somtimes it didn't flow so well, but that may ...

    May 6, 2009
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Racing Wind- Chapter 1- Edited

    I did really like this story, but I found her changing a bit confusing. I think if I was suddenly running that fast, I would seem more worried, especially with ...

    May 6, 2009


The first draft is a trip to the amusement park. The next drafts are returning there as a safety inspector.
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