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Re: Pianissimo
Thank you, you three! You've just made my day! When I get home from church today, I'll go back and edit the concerto part (make it a little longer) and ...
Mar 16, 2008 -
Re: Wolf's crit shop: Revamped!
Hey, thanks for critting everything! I have one more thing for you. Pianissimo Thanks! -Jared
Mar 16, 2008 -
Re: Pianissimo
Pianissimo There was a letter placed on the grand piano. The note, wrinkled from many openings, was addressed to a young man sitting at the bench. Raymond Simmons stared at ...
Mar 16, 2008 -
Re: The Critic
Hey! I'm always open for suggestions on my romance short story! Don't worry - the parts aren't long at all! I Think I'm in Love #1 I Think I'm in ...
Mar 16, 2008 -
Re: Pierced with love
Hey, Slinds! What's up? Ok, I'm gonna be honest. None of the last lines of any stanza really worked for me. You seem to be forcing all of your rhymes, ...
Mar 15, 2008 -
Re: EverWayward #13
Hey, Mark! Why aren't you going to be posting any more after this? This is an incredible story... Well, I've been thinking and I've decided that listing a bunch of ...
Mar 15, 2008 -
Re: Happy Pi Day!
Pi!!!!
Mar 14, 2008 -
Re: Happy Pi Day!
Happy Pi Day everyone!!!! It's 3.14! The fourteenth of March! Get it? My math class (Geometry sucks...) had a big party in celebration of the friggen awesome Pi symbol... which ...
Mar 14, 2008 -
Re: Wolf's crit shop: Revamped!
Here is my I Think I'm In Love #4 that you asked for! -Jared
Mar 14, 2008 -
Re: Title Feedback
Sounds like a slightly depressing Adams' Family... I Think I'm in Love
Mar 14, 2008 -
Re: I Think I'm in Love #4
This is the final section of my short story, "I Think I'm In Love". I want to thank all of those people who have supported me and have helped me ...
Mar 14, 2008 -
Re: Wolf's crit shop: Revamped!
Hey, Wolf! I need some help with HarborVille Prologue if you can get the chance. Thanks. -Jared
Mar 13, 2008 -
Re: For You...
Yep. Please, anyone who is even remotely talented with poetry, I need help with this. I need good, constructive critism to make this the best poem I've ever wrote. -Jared
Mar 13, 2008 -
Re: American Idol
American Idol has been especially great this year. The contestants are excellent, and they really rock. So, this is to list your favorite contestant, to find out who was booted, ...
Mar 13, 2008 -
Re: Are you the Real Riddler too?
I know #5! It's Water!
Mar 12, 2008
