BigBadBear

Ooh! That was a wonderful poem! I especially liked the last two lines. Okay, welcome to YWS, by the way. Okay, now you heaven and hell defintions were very good. ...

[Ryan Peterson] Why was she so anxious? "Um, yeah. I've never really liked coffee, but it's alright, I guess." His voice was quiet, and charming. "Um, can I ask you ...

Wow. That was really beautiful. I really loved all of the metaphors that you used in this... it's just beautiful. There was only one grammatical error. and I breathe heavy. ...

[Ryan Peterson] His heart sank. Why did she have to look at him like that? "Um, my parents are divorced. My dad remarried and my mom hasn't. I've a 12 ...

Awwwh. Why doesn't this have any critiques? I'll change that. :o You looked mad. Could you find another word than 'mad'? It's so plain! This is where you can add ...

[Ryan Peterson] Sipping his coffee, Ryan looked at the table. There were etchings on it, swear words of all types. "Look, I'm sorry. I don't know what I was -" ...

Hey, tRiCk! What's up? Welcome to YWS, by the way. Ok, this is common in newbies (hehe) but be sure to put a space between each paragraphs, like I am ...

Hey, Kyte. What's up? "Hello? O-o ? Is anybody there-ere-ere?" That reminds me of the eyes we use in the chat. hehe. O.o It was a really good start, but ...

Hey, SCL! What's up? I all alone and lost in life I = I'm :) I liked this first stanza. It's great. Yeah... :P I can’t stand it No more! ...

[Ryan Peterson] The sun was setting, and Ryan could see the light fading in his dorm room. Nick wasn't there; and he didn't know where he was. Ryan was sitting ...

[s]Dude. Seriously. I hope you don't think that this is a poem. This is... horrible. Sorry dude. -Jared [/s] EDIT: Yeah, sorry guys. I guess I was just... not very ...

[Ryan Peterson] "Well, uh, I've never really been to a dance," Ryan squirmed to get out of this awkward situation. "The only dance I've been to was the high school ...

I just barely took this like five mins ago. I hope you like it. (Ignore all of the facial disturbances, please. XD)

Great story! I love it, but Prince Charming is a little vulgar though. But then, he's what makes the story funny. I like this version of Snow White better than ...

So...any pets?" I repeated. He seemed to be having a hard time hearing me *XDXD funny* [Ryan Peterson] Pets? Ryan's mind went blank. Maybe he had had a pet. Didn't ...