BigBadBear

XP Had to click on it because of the title! [s]Then,[/s] he rubbed some residue that was dripping from his bottom lip. Paul Revere is drooling. You changed tenses here. ...

Hey. I'm reading too. I like Ever Wayward. It has a really cool feel to it. -Jared

I'm not in the best of moods, so sorry if I come across a bit harsh. It was good, but nothing spectacular that would want to make me read it ...

Hey guys. There have been a lot of suggestions to change Zekyll's voice in the chapter. But that's his personality. He's a little slow at times, and is sarcastic. If ...

I'm speedybear! Haha. But I have no clue how to format scripts... -Jared

I try and try and try and I can never get the full swing of fantasy. So I'm trying again. So far, I think it's turned out pretty good. This ...

Sounds like a hot Hawaiian girl. Hahha -Jared

Oh. Now it makes sense... I was wondering why I wasn't getting points. Oh well. I'll earn more points to make up for all of those SB's I'm in... :) ...

Hey, Cal! Well, I read your other poem, and I didn't think that I liked it all that much. It was nothing really amazing about it. It didn't stick out ...

Banned for not having correct grammar in your siggy. Pfft. -Jared

Banned for liking wolves and not bears.

*gasp* Oh em gee! *gasp* *pants for breath* I am like... you're #1 fan!!! *gasp* *screams wildy as Razor steps out of her limo* Hehe. Really. Your work is fantastic. ...

Well... I don't know why it's such a big fuss. It happened 20 years ago... it's not really news now... it's in the past... -Jared

Hey! This was a very good poem, and I can't offer any critiques but It has cool line breaks, but I can't get them to show up You might want ...

This is a romance that I think you'll like -Jared