BigBadBear

Hey! Welcome to YWS. Now, before I read this I ask that you please put a space between each paragraph like I'm doing. You'll get a lot more critiques that ...

Huh... Well, I guess it was an okay poem. You've done better. I've read some of your others... let's see... how should I put this? The poem didn't have a ...

Tag, This was an amazing poem. It really was. I loved the whole metaphore, the whole meaning... the whole shika-bob. Haha. Dude. You are going to be a famous poet ...

Oh, I'm so sorry! I totally forgot that I was supposed to do this! Sorry! Okay, I'll come back later and do this because I have to go to church. ...

Dude, you've been on this site long enough to know that you have to double space between paragraphs. Please! It's impossible to read without it. Please do it. I'll come ...

Wow. She's smexy. XD I love it! It's so realistic looking! You did a great job with the hair. I fail at drawing... -.- -Jared

My girlfriend (yeah, I have one now!!!) wrote this poem, and she wanted people to read it and comment. I think that it's great!!!! Tiny Hands, Tiny Feet For Ashton ...

haha. Why has no one critted this? XD It’s like fading into a larger picture Wherein you lose all delicate features And wonder where the light has gone. [And] You ...

*dies* Seriously, Jabber. How come everything you write is so... addictive? Haha. This story was fantastic. I liked it a lot. It was really funny, and liked the whole puffin ...

Duuuuuude. You are like my twin. We like all of the same things. Funny how things work like that, no? Haha, Welcome to YWS! It's a great site, and I ...

Hey, Jess. I usually don't read R stuff, but I thought that since you've been talking about it, I'd take a peek. It was good. It seems like a scene ...

Reminds me of potato chips. Yum.

Some of you know about Randi, and what happened. I'm still mourning for her... and I decided to write her this poem. It really sucks right now, but I would ...

Hey. Don't let everyone tell you it sucks, because you said that it was a concrete poem. Go back and edit this. Delete the entire thing and re-copy and paste ...

O.o you have another one? Let's take a look! “A miniscule trace of the Adamses bloodline may be circulating through thy veins but ye are not pure of blood. Therefore, ...