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Re: The Accursed Cartographer
Hey, Bear. Awesome name, btw. I set down the pack and sighed. My eyes had started to hurt again. They had been bothering me more and more, those days . ...
May 5, 2008 -
Re: Title Feedback
It gives me the picture of a misty morning in the mountains. Very adventurous. Your Coat of Arms
May 4, 2008 -
Re: Your Coat of Arms is the Lion
Hey, Sumi! Since I'm gonna be working with this for a while, I decided to tell you exactly how I felt about it. *This might be long* A lot of ...
May 4, 2008 -
Re: Chapter 5 of Wrong or Right
:) Dude, you've got to stop being so good at writing... I mean... you're going to be the next Dan Patterson or something! Annnyway, this was a great chapter. I've ...
May 2, 2008 -
Re: Chapter 4 of Wrong or Right
Please rate this R because it has the 'f' word in it. I've been following this story and I have no critiques as of now. Next chapter I'll give a ...
May 1, 2008 -
Re: Run, Fat Boy, Run! Day 3
Here is Day Three! A change of heart is in store for our overweight Fat Boy. Hopefully, within the week, he can organize himself enough to set up a routine. ...
Apr 28, 2008 -
Re: Sewn Shut
Hey Suz! I went and printed this out, edited it and wrote some comments. It was fantastic! The Holocaust started with one man and ended with ten million dead. Jews, ...
Apr 28, 2008 -
Re: Chance of Snow 2
I'm back! Actually, I had a father because everyone has a father, only I didn’t know him. My mother said he left when I was really little because the doctors ...
Apr 26, 2008 -
Re: Chance of Snow 1
Hey, Suz! I can't believe I haven't read this yet. Someone was talking about it in the chat or something and I've always wanted to take a look at it, ...
Apr 26, 2008 -
Re: Knock-down, Drag-out
Hey. :) Ok, before I start, you need to edit this and rate it R because it has the 'f' word and if it has the 'f' word, it needs ...
Apr 26, 2008 -
Re: sanctum is real
Ugh! Just tell us the friggen password! -Jared
Apr 26, 2008 -
Re: First Kiss
Oh goodness! I did not expect that ending - took me totally by surprise. Like Aliam, I was like, "Oh gosh! He's licking her!" But it was just her dog. ...
Apr 24, 2008 -
Re: YWS Fan-fiction Search
I echo Penguin. If ya need me, I'm here. :)
Apr 24, 2008 -
Re: Run, Fat Boy, Run! Day 2
I don't know why, but Run, Fat Boy, Run is terribly fun to write. It's just... it's me. Except not really. Many of these things have happened to me, and ...
Apr 23, 2008 -
Re: Run, Fat Boy, Run! Day 1
I seem to have better luck with journal entries! So, here is another journal story. I think that it will turn out really good. I'll write an entry a day ...
Apr 22, 2008
