BigBadBear

... Shouldn't this be in the contest forum?

*Rated for language and violence. And some scary parts. I hope.* - Genesis 4:12 –16, “When thou tillest the ground, is shall not henceforth yield unto thee her strength; a ...

*is bumping because I want some critiques*

*cough* Please don't post your full name. Please edit your posts before the mods get you. And you don't like them when they are angry. =O -Jared

Hehe. This was awesome. Seriously. There is nothing to critique you on, sadly. I wish that I could find something. I want to read more and more! So post more ...

........ Go where?

Eghad! This was probably the best story you've written so far. I mean... it was really great. I really liked it. Your grammar has gotten really great. Screaming. Dying echoes ...

Done! Amazing. -Jared

Hey! I'm here, due to your friggen awesome request. :) Too human to be an animal, too animal to be a human. Just wanted to tell you that this was ...

Unfortuantly, the school district caught them and fired them all.

Awesome. I have everything up to date. Please, I'm so bored right now. Pile me high with critiques!! -Jared

Oh my gosh! I've never had a Sam critique! What's it like? That's from my new musical that I'm working on with Sumi H. Inkblot. We need all of the ...

Finally! Some helpful critiques! Thank you so much! I'm really going to take all of this into consideration. Perra, and JFW, I really owe you guys! Thanks. Is there anyone ...

This is probably the most true poem there could ever be. Heck, I don't think that anything this... uh... what's the word... this clear could've been written. Especially by you. ...

Ack! You can't be serious! This is the end?! Ugh! This was way too good. Too good for my eyes. xD Anyway, you've edited like mad, so I couldn't spot ...