BigBadBear

Hey, thanks a lot! Haha, yeah I try to throw some humor in with all of the serious issues that Fatty goes through. It makes it (I think) easier to ...

It's like, seriously awesome. Except the hair. It looks like she was from the '60's or something. But otherwise, it was fantastic. But seriously, that hair is not that good. ...

“Hey.” The doctor had this ugly mustache on his oily face. It was so horrendous that I couldn’t even look at it. I instantly turned my gaze to the checkered ...

In the nights so cold , [perhaps a comma right here?] the stars hang bright and frozen, burn the crocuses in the oil lamp I gave you, and imagine our ...

Picture 1: I don't like this. It's just... not very well taken, I guess? But I've never critique any photos before, so this is probably completely useless. There is just ...

Um... This really... isn't a story? This really... isn't anything.

Hey! I'd always like some help with Run, Fat Boy, Run! . Please and thank you! -Jared

Hey! I've seen your awesomeness critiques and I've always wanted one! sorry, I can't provide a link, but it's called Run, Fat Boy, Run! Day 1. It's short, and it's ...

Hey! I'm always looking for help on Run, Fat Boy, Run! Please and thank you! -Jared

Hey, Yoyo! You really liked 'I Think I'm in Love' so I think you might also like Run, Fat Boy, Run! . This is just day one. It's been a ...

Chocolte (duh). Savoury... probably chicken. Iced and Hot chocolates rule, and lemonade is good as well. Iced chocolate? Oh! I wanna try some! Food: Spaghetti! Drink: Dr. Pepper!

Wow, JFW, thank you so much! I always miss those things that you talk about. I used to go dash crazy, but now I've gone comma crazy... Anyway, yeah, the ...

Eek! This was exciting to write! Okay, someone stated earlier in a critique that this would get really boring if there wasn't any conflict soon. So here you go! This ...

Hey! Welcome to YWS! I must say that before I even started reading this, your little introduction back-up story was very interesting. Really urged me to read on. ‘I am ...

*gasp* Whoa, dude. I just got this... this tingle up my neck as I read that last line! Dude, that was awesome! The ryhming was rather... forced. This poem rhymed, ...