BigBadBear

Wow, Jabber, this is getting morbid. Hehe. Okay, I honestly think that everything is happening too quickly. Everyone is dying too quickly! Ugh! I think it's gonna be impossible to ...

Hey! I was wondering if you could check these out: Pianissimo Mezzo Forte Thanks! -Jared

Hey! I was wondering if you could check these out: Pianissimo Mezzo Forte Thanks! -Jared

Hey, everyone. Raymond Simmons has been bugging me to tell his story, and now I finally have. This is the sequel to Pianissimo . I would recommend you read that ...

Hey, Kylan! Edits first! The bridge spanning across a constellation of dimensions like an ocean trillion marble-sized stars was just to big, too expansive. marble-sized stars WERE just TOO big, ...

At first I thought this was talking about a lightning storm, but after about the second stanza I dropped that. I really don't know what it's about... Anyway, your line ...

'Kay. I'm gonna be very truthful with you here. I didn't like this. I was expecting something else entirely. In fact... none of this made sense. I couldn't understand what ...

Holy freak! Uh! I do not wanna leave a critique right now, lol. I gotta find out what happens. But since you're such a freak-tastic writer, I gotta leave one. ...

Hey, Kylan! Well, I'm going to echo every critique when I say it was friggen awesome. Not that that's totally surprising. Has there ever been anything that hasn't exceeded my ...

Hey! Thanks for the critique on my story. I am so glad you're back! YWS is hopeless without Fangala! I could never know what I never learned; I could never ...

This is REALLY long. Nobody is gonna read it unless you break it up. I would suggest posting just the prologue today. And then some other time post Year 1. ...

No. No. This... this can't end here. Suz, please, you have to post more! Once I read the first one, I didn't even bother critiqing because I needed to find ...

Razor! How goes things? This looks really cool. Well, hah. What am I saying? Everything you do is fantabulous. I feel like being harsh. :) For first sentence is an ...

I want to experiment with quotes... So quote this? And I quote! Haha, awesome. Quote! Wait... maybe it's quoth? I don't know; quoth sounds like a type of squash ^_^ ...

I'm always looking for help on how to improve this. I need someone real harsh to tear it up. -Jared