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Re: The Séance
Thank you all so much for your help! This is all edited and pretty good so far. Again, thanks. I believe the sequel will be named The Ouija Board . ...
Jun 7, 2008 -
Re: The Dragon, the Dog, and the Dove
Jabber! After that amazingess critique you left me, you deserve this more than anything. I lurve you! A gunshot got Kingsley’s heart pounding against his chest. A gunshot got Kingsley's ...
Jun 7, 2008 -
Re: Poor Imp's Poor House - Poor No More
Hey, Poor Imp! How are you? D'you mind taking a look at The Séance for me please? -Jared
Jun 7, 2008 -
Re: I'm Hungry...
*hugs* You're as nice as heaven! The Séance Thankee very much! -Jared
Jun 7, 2008 -
Re: The Séance
I absolutely love scary stories. I've attempted a few in my writings, but I've never had a full out horror story. I hope this can pull out to be one. ...
Jun 7, 2008 -
Re: Report A Site Bug
That's not what I meant. It's like when you click the Post Reply button, and you scroll down to see what messages have been posted before yours. None of them ...
Jun 7, 2008 -
Re: Questions Only
Just go and get the plates and cups, please?
Jun 7, 2008 -
Re: Questions Only
Well, who else would get them besides you?
Jun 6, 2008 -
Re: Report A Site Bug
Not really sure if this is a bug, but whenever I go to critique a piece, I rarely use the quick reply box. So, I click on the "Post Reply" ...
Jun 6, 2008 -
Re: Gerrymandering (1) [edit 07/01]
Haha. Man, Sam, I love you, first of all. So much. I wanna squeeze you till your amazingness covers me. Okay. Now that that is taken care of, there was ...
Jun 6, 2008 -
Re: Martha, I'm Coming
This is for Cal's contest. I hope you guys like it! Hopefully this can be edited enough for it to look presentable in her eyes. ;) The prompt I used ...
Jun 6, 2008 -
Re: Reviewing Challenge
Currently, I have 471 reviews. I'm gonna bump that up to 520 by the end of June. That is 49 reviews. -Jared
Jun 5, 2008 -
Re: Male vs. Female Teachers
I work at an elementary school, and I noticed that the school had no male teachers. Why? I wondered. Were they sexist or something? XD What do you prefer? Male ...
Jun 5, 2008 -
Re: Machinations #4
Hey Kylan! This was amazing, as always. It really was. There was one sentence that bugged me a little bit. I think you're being just a little too scientific here: ...
Jun 4, 2008 -
Re: Untitled
Hey! Welcome to YWS! This is a pretty decent poem you have here. Although... I would cut out the 'f' bomb because it doesn't add anything to the story except ...
Jun 3, 2008
