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  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Séance

    Thank you all so much for your help! This is all edited and pretty good so far. Again, thanks. I believe the sequel will be named The Ouija Board . ...

    Jun 7, 2008
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: The Dragon, the Dog, and the Dove

    Jabber! After that amazingess critique you left me, you deserve this more than anything. I lurve you! A gunshot got Kingsley’s heart pounding against his chest. A gunshot got Kingsley's ...

    Jun 7, 2008
  • WRFF Archive Re: Poor Imp's Poor House - Poor No More

    Hey, Poor Imp! How are you? D'you mind taking a look at The Séance for me please? -Jared

    Jun 7, 2008
  • WRFF Archive Re: I'm Hungry...

    *hugs* You're as nice as heaven! The Séance Thankee very much! -Jared

    Jun 7, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Séance

    I absolutely love scary stories. I've attempted a few in my writings, but I've never had a full out horror story. I hope this can pull out to be one. ...

    Jun 7, 2008
  • Information Desk Archive Re: Report A Site Bug

    That's not what I meant. It's like when you click the Post Reply button, and you scroll down to see what messages have been posted before yours. None of them ...

    Jun 7, 2008
  • Writing Activities Re: Questions Only

    Just go and get the plates and cups, please?

    Jun 7, 2008
  • Writing Activities Re: Questions Only

    Well, who else would get them besides you?

    Jun 6, 2008
  • Information Desk Archive Re: Report A Site Bug

    Not really sure if this is a bug, but whenever I go to critique a piece, I rarely use the quick reply box. So, I click on the "Post Reply" ...

    Jun 6, 2008
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Gerrymandering (1) [edit 07/01]

    Haha. Man, Sam, I love you, first of all. So much. I wanna squeeze you till your amazingness covers me. Okay. Now that that is taken care of, there was ...

    Jun 6, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Martha, I'm Coming

    This is for Cal's contest. I hope you guys like it! Hopefully this can be edited enough for it to look presentable in her eyes. ;) The prompt I used ...

    Jun 6, 2008
  • Lounge, The Re: Reviewing Challenge

    Currently, I have 471 reviews. I'm gonna bump that up to 520 by the end of June. That is 49 reviews. -Jared

    Jun 5, 2008
  • Lounge, The Re: Male vs. Female Teachers

    I work at an elementary school, and I noticed that the school had no male teachers. Why? I wondered. Were they sexist or something? XD What do you prefer? Male ...

    Jun 5, 2008
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Machinations #4

    Hey Kylan! This was amazing, as always. It really was. There was one sentence that bugged me a little bit. I think you're being just a little too scientific here: ...

    Jun 4, 2008
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Untitled

    Hey! Welcome to YWS! This is a pretty decent poem you have here. Although... I would cut out the 'f' bomb because it doesn't add anything to the story except ...

    Jun 3, 2008


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