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Hey!! Suz, I'm so sorry that I forgot about this. Seriously. I told you I would critique this what? three days ago? I think so. I'm terribly sorry. VINCE: From ...

Please don't ask how I came up with this idea. You do not want to know. And, yes, this is probably crap right now, but it's for JFW1415's Side-Character's contest. ...

Dude! I live there! Jenna, come visit me! I'll give you cookies! -Jared

Fat Boy's back! - Day Six Armpit hair, I think, is what makes a man a man. Don’t you think so? I mean, if grown men had no hair under ...

Hey! Welcome to YWS! I love writing songs, too! It's really fun. As Adna said, please review 2 things right now, seeing as you've already posted something. You don't want ...

Haha. Silly Niteowl. Welcome to YWS! I know that you will have an amazing time here. If you have any questions, any questions at all, please contact anyone with a ...

You live in India! How is that? That's an awesome country (I did a country report on it once). That's exciting! So, Niteowl pretty much gave you the 2:1 ratio. ...

Hey, Katie! Awesome name! I hope you like the site so far. Alainna pretty much covered the basic stuff. The 2:1 ratio of reviewing:critiques. Pretty simple stuff there. Oh, and ...

Until! Or the abbreviation of until, so, 'til. Ever look at a word so much that it doesn't look like a word anymore? o_O That's freaky. You're right. Until looks ...

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“NOOOOO!” he groaned. No. Just no. Simply no. You cannot and should not use caps to determine yelling. And stretching the 'no' out with more 'o's makes this sound very ...

Kylan, I love this story. I read like up to the third chapter and then I saw that you posted a re-write. Let's have a look? “This is urgent. Just ...

Hey, AJ! Wow, you have a lot of pets! That must be awesome. Although, I must ask: what's a griffin? That's... interesting? Anyway, I hope you have a fantastic time ...

Hey, Robyn! You have an awesome name! Before you post your stories and poems, be sure that you write to reviews. It's a rule that we have on YWS. It's ...

I echo the guy above me. This was terrific (but when is it not?). I'm really loving the characters. I love the way that you are setting it up - ...