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Re: Abkhazia, Resolute [introduction]
Zomgoodness! An original Sam production! (don't ask) I can't wait to read this! Ahh! I'm so excited! *calms down* DA CRITIQUE: genshibakudan What the fluff does that mean? she could ...
Jul 6, 2008 -
Re: Help me YWS! T_T
I think this would be amazingly good if she was terrified. I mean, if you are kidnapped, you're gonna be scared. You could make this a very intense thriller. -Jared
Jul 5, 2008 -
Re: I Got A Really Good Idea
I like the idea, but parts of it became a little too cheesy for me. Maybe it's just the way that you described it, but it didn't seem realistic. Well... ...
Jul 4, 2008 -
Re: New Member Alo Mate Haha Hola Hello
Hey Joyce! Well, you're exceedingly awesome, I can tell you that. >.> Very full of spirit and... writing-ness. .> By the way, we don't want to be rude or anything, ...
Jul 3, 2008 -
Re: The 'In Your Pants' Game
Touch my Body in your pants. :) -Jared
Jul 2, 2008 -
Re: What is the member above you known for?
Hippo? It was a playtipus. Or however the heck you spell it. Know for being an amazing artist. You forked her... :( I miss... oh... whatever the girl's name was.
Jun 30, 2008 -
Re: What is the member above you known for?
Known for giving hugs and muahs to all before leaving chat. -Jared
Jun 30, 2008 -
Re: Cockroaches and Condoms
There's really nothing to critique here. It's perfect, grammar wise. I really can't find any fault in this, other than telling you the usual stuff. You know. 'I want more! ...
Jun 30, 2008 -
Re: Summer Reading Recommendations
I'm reading House of Leaves by Mark Z. Danielewski. If you are getting tired of the same type of book over and over, you need to read this book. It ...
Jun 30, 2008 -
Re: Free Reviews?
Fantastic! I'm so excited to get these critiqued! I'm actually going to print these out and critique them, but they won't get posted until the points go down to 300. ...
Jun 30, 2008 -
Re: Finding the Wandering City
Jabber! Long time no post! You need to be more active! XD I missed you. Mrs. Burnett laughed again. “Obviously. Writer’s block, I take it?” For some odd reason I've ...
Jun 30, 2008 -
Re: What is the member above you known for?
For leaving fantastical reviews. -Jared
Jun 29, 2008 -
Re: Mr. Rochester
I love this picture. The head, mostly. Hah, like you said, he kinda looks like he's hunchbacked. Kinda awkward. I really don't know how to critique artwork. So I'm going ...
Jun 28, 2008 -
Re: Evelyn
Wow. This is incredible! I can't believe that you drew such a masterpiece! Holly, this is amazing! And, hah, it does look a bit like Angelina. Annnyway. This may get ...
Jun 28, 2008 -
Re: KABOOM!
This is a very happy piece. I really like it. It's very different, unique and all around very nice. I can't really critique it because it's just noises... but hey... ...
Jun 28, 2008
