BigBadBear

Hey! Welcome to YWS! Haha, you like Phantom too? (Look at my avatar!) POTO rocks. That was the first musical that I fell in love with. Anyway, welcome to YWS! ...

Aliam Remard, No. No, no, no, no, no. I did not like this chapter at all. Ugh. Where do I start? First, this was highly unrealistic. The dialog wasn’t right, ...

Thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you! Everybody has boosted my ego! XD Okay. No one seems to understand this part, so I'm going to post it for the ...

This was really good. Direct and to the point. I'm going to find all of the errors right now, for you. :) If crippled or deformed [comma] the dancer has ...

Night Terrors I have just posted this and wondered if I could get some reviews?

Night Terrors I have just posted this and wondered if I could get some reviews?

Night Terrors I have just posted this and wondered if I could get some reviews?

Night Terrors I have just posted this and wondered if I could get some reviews?

Night Terrors I have just posted this and wondered if I could get some reviews?

Night Terrors I have just posted this and wondered if I could get some reviews?

I have wanted to post this for quite some time now, but I never really knew if I should. This is for the CIA contest. I CANNOT ACCEPT GRAMMAR REVISIONS. ...

Just a minute ago (8:53 pm Utah Time XD) I clicked on 'Home' and it came up saying that there was a critical error, but then I reloaded the page, ...

Aliam Remard, This was an amazing chapter. Not that it surprised me or anything that you could write such a great story. It’s really getting good. I cannot wait for ...

Aliam Remard, Oh, my goodness. This was really amazing! I can’t believe that I would ever come across a fantasy that I can really get into. I really dislike fantasies, ...

Hello, and welcome to YWS! Okay, you want to know why no one has critiqued this yet? Because it's way too long. Please shorten this to just one chapter. No ...