BigBadBear

Happy Birthday! Everyone, let's spam her PM box with love! -Jared PS: I love you, Sam!

Mini Cooper: It's very smudgy, but I'm not sure if that's how you wanted it. I really love smudged stuff, because it makes it look softer. You know. Not quite ...

It's neat, but I think that the little splotches of red dashing through the bright part of the eye really throws it down. If you were to get rid of ...

These are really, really good! Though (surprisingly) I have something to comment on them. 1. This house is my favorite out of all of them. I am in love with ...

Edited! Thank you guys so much! -Jared

Bye!!!!!!! -Jared

Ledger was an amazing actor. The Dark Knight was by far the best movie he's ever done. His acting was amazing, and I'm still in awe. -Jared

Done.

Niccy_V, You have a pretty good start here. I like it a lot, even if the whole ‘cheating’ thing is terribly cliché. I’m going to follow what you wanted to ...

Done! I'm now totally free. Please send in your links. I'm available right now. Send me everything... but fantasy. Please. No more of that. -Jared PS: I'll do better if ...

RoryLegend, This part was bloody brilliant! I stand in awe at your magnificence! Someone mentioned this in an earlier critique on another chapter, and they said that this was a ...

RoryLegend, Gah! This chapter was much too short! You have me addicted to this story. XD Yep, it’s that good. Your main problem in this chapter isn’t really the story, ...

RoryLegend, You have a really good start here. I’m liking the storyline so far. Your characters are very believe able, but please be careful. There have been so many Twilight ...

Run, Fat Boy, Run! Day 7 I Love My Dirt; My Dirt Loves Me -Jared

Hey, Lucy! How are youuuuu? Welcome to YWS! This is such an addicting site. Seriously. It should be illegal because it's so addicting. Everyone else has basically covered all of ...