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Re: Hey, did you know when Suzanne and Jabber Hut's b-day is?
It's on the 26th. I can't wait. I'm gonna spam their PM boxes with love, just like everyone else's birthday present. *glugs Jabbs and Suz tightly* -Jared
Jul 24, 2008 -
Re: The Captain's Critiques
Murder & Investigation 1 - Before the Murder Murder & Investigation 2 - Discovery of the Murder Eh, sorry for the lame titles. The first one has like a bajallion ...
Jul 24, 2008 -
Re: Wise Reviewing
Murder & Investigation 1 - Before the Murder Murder & Investigation 2 - Discovery of the Murder Eh, sorry for the lame titles. The first one has like a bajallion ...
Jul 24, 2008 -
Re: Blinkingly-good Crits
Murder & Investigation 1 - Before the Murder Murder & Investigation 2 - Discovery of the Murder Eh, sorry for the lame titles. The first one has like a bajallion ...
Jul 24, 2008 -
Re: Murder & Investigation #2 - Discovery of the Murder
*Warning: This has references to rape and other sexual things. Rated for language* Sorry it took so freaking long to post this. I completely forgot about it + the first ...
Jul 24, 2008 -
Re: Keeping Time
Suzanne, Wonderful story! I really enjoyed it. It was very fun to read, and I really didn’t have much to say in the line-by-line critique I’ve attached. The ending was ...
Jul 23, 2008 -
Re: Keeping Time
(shouldn't this be rated R? It has the 'f' word.) I will critique this soon! But I have to go. Byyye! -Jared
Jul 22, 2008 -
Re: I Kissed a Girl
I prayed that nightmares hadn’t visited her [s]that night[/s]. She tangled her fingers in my hair; the softest whisper of a word escaped her lips[s]…[/s] . I think it was ...
Jul 22, 2008 -
Re: Give me your tired, your poor, your huddled masses...
Just posted this. I'm not that great at poetry and need all the help I can get. XD -Jared
Jul 22, 2008 -
Re: Pep For Poets
Just posted this. I'm not that great at poetry and need all the help I can get. XD -Jared
Jul 22, 2008 -
Re: Moonlight Dances In The Water
This is a really short poem, and I wish that it wouldn't cost me a hundred points to post this. -.- - Moonlight dances in the water, while midnight makes ...
Jul 22, 2008 -
Re: What was your first story about?
I wrote it in first grade. It was called The Jaguar and the Bobcat. It was about a nice little bobcat the accidently went into the Jaguar's cave, and then ...
Jul 21, 2008 -
Re: HELLOOOOOOOOOO!
Hey!!!!! Welcome to YWS, Hollie! How are youuuu? I know that you'll just love it here. YWS is so addicting, it should be illegal. I'm Jared, BBB, BigBadBear, 3B, or ...
Jul 21, 2008 -
Re: Beautifully Evil #1
Holy cow. I have no idea how you found this -- It was abandoned long ago. But I finished it... and it was a piece of crap. But thanks? The ...
Jul 21, 2008 -
Re: New to the site
Hey! Welcome to the site, Rowan! You have an interesting name! I really like it. There are a whole bunch of fantasy people on here. Sadly, I am not one ...
Jul 21, 2008