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8/10 because you have to love pigs no matter what. *glugs piggy* -Jared

I would looooooooooooove a Hollymiester critique on this . It would make me happy inside. And sure. I'll read those ones for Cal's contest. ;) -Jared

gh gh? What? 10/10. Made me laugh my head off. -Jared

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Hey, Kylan! I don't have anything action/adventure/shootemups, but I have this , and it only has like 2 real helpful reviews. I'd really like some help on it. -Jared

Hey! Kylan, I have to tell you something. I can't do it any longer. I'm not supposed to read this until the contest is over, but it just looks so ...

Thank you so so much (I'm thanking you for critiquing a thank you letter. O.o) for all of the wonderful critiques and revisions! Heather >> Oh my goodness, you are ...

Hey. I love your critiques. They're so fantastic! You should apply to be an Instructor, dude. Anyway. To add to your list to do: I Love My Dirt; My Dirt ...

4/10. Eh... what is it? -Jared

Hey Heather!!! A Thank You Note to Donny could use some help and pointers. Thanks. -Jared

Thank You Note to Donny Just posted and could use a few pointers. Thanks, dude. ;) -Jared

August 3, 1978 Dearest Donny, You truly made my day when you visited yesterday and for that I would like to say thank you. It was yesterday, wasn't it? I ...

Shouldn't the chat be open right now? -Jared

I can't write if there's people around me. xD I just can't. Ditto, homeskillet. I write in my room. I can't write anywhere else. MSN has to be closed down, ...

Hey there. You had critiqued something of mine, so I thought that you might want a bit of help on this. In my line-by-line attachment below, I could barely find ...