BigBadBear

59,000 words. 267 pages... (double spaced, 14 point font) -Jared

Hello! Welcome to YWS! I have to say that I really liked this. I really do. It's a fantastic concept that can be suspenseful, thrilling and great, if you write ...

Me too, Always. I rarely ever do more than one draft. I feel that it loses my original voice that was so good. And I would just edit it and ...

The first thing I noticed right off the bat was there was absolutely no capitalization in the beginning of the sentence. Seriously, dude. You could write this masterpiece. Just a ...

This is a really good poem. Seriously. It's original too. You had a few grammar mistakes that glare. Seriously. XD Or was it so fast that, I never had time ...

Hey, Yoyo. First off, I really liked this poem. Second off, I loved the 'Ow's. Haha. It made me smile. It was a really good poem. Not deep or anything, ...

I Have a Secret I have a secret: A song to sing. A poem to read. It’s a formidable thing. Do you dare enter my domain? My mind of all ...

Hey there. I'm Jared and I shall be your critic today. I'm going to be honest here, okay? I know you said that this was your favorite poem, but I ...

Hey, there! Welcome to YWS, the most addicting site you'll ever find on the internet. I'm Jared, BBB, BigBadBear, or any combination thereof. How are you? I'm pretty fantastic myself. ...

Hey there! Welcome to YWS! I'm Jared, BBB, BigBadBear, or any combination therof. How do you do? Yeah. YWS is so addicting, man. It should be illegal cause it's so ...

Why does everything look like a balloon about to pop? -Jared

4/10, because I only know the Kooks and don't really like 'em. 1. San Tropez - Pink Floyd 2. Not a Virgin - Poe (Erm... where did this song come ...

I'm sorry. I really fail at fantasy. I've never been able to get into 'em. So sorry. Any more? -Jared

Hello, there! I'm Jared, and I'll be your critic for today. ;) I woke with a start. It was the same vivd [vivid, not vivd] reoccuring [reoccurring, not reoccuring] nightmare ...

ZOMG. If it has Wicked, it gets my full approval! 10/10 1. In Love - Brooke White 2. As Long As You Love Me - Backstreet Boys. Don't ask. 3. ...