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O.o How did you find this poem? Haha. Wow. This brings back unwanted memories. -.- Thanks for the critique, though, Gadi. -Jared

XD But chicken tastes better. -Jared

Because of all of the persistent bugging in writing this, I finally decided to do it, and here it is! Thanks for everyone who has critiqued the last three parts. ...

No. I'm not. -Jared

LOL Nate, you made me spit out orange juice! Gosh. -Jared

I hate it when people title their stuff 'Untitled'. I mean, how much more of a lame title can you get? Seriously. I would rather see your lame title skills ...

"Here I am," Jared said, "showing Derek how to do dialog formatting. It's not that hard, really, once you know the basic things. But, like always, there are different paragraphs ...

*Pokes* Who says we change this to 'in five years' for people around 17 or older, and 'in ten years' for people younger? 'cause 25 years is looong. And I ...

15. Kylan 16. Snoink 17. Suzanne -Jared

Link here I really think Webber's messing with his greatest hit. All sequels stink. Always. Musical wise, anyway. What do you guys think? I don't think he can pull it ...

Caaaaaaaaaaaaat-sama! This is the first critique I've done this week! *jazzlebungles* (not to mention it's Saturday) Okay. Skip the lame grammar edits; Jabber's gotten them all. Dang you. I'll move ...

Eh, it's deleted. Not worth critiquing for. So yeah. Skip me! ^_^ -Jared

I KNEW IT. ALIENS DO EXIST. HAH. BEAT THAT, RUMPELSTILTSKIN! -Jared

OH. MY. GOSH. The funniest movie you will ever see. Probably only writers will understand why it's so funny. Ohmigosh, when the author started having conversations with her characters, I ...

You are weird, Jen. I don't know you. -Jared