BigBadBear

Lame. I have 191 followers. -Jared

Kylan, this is the best poem that you've written in a while, even if you did write it a while back. I'm not going to critique it because I fail ...

blackbird12, I love how every time I log onto this site, there's a new work posted by you. It makes me happy. Well, I didn't expect this poem to be ...

The Séance Revival is another attempt at a series of seven short stories that I wrote a while ago. This is part 1/7. Each part is one of the seven ...

blackbird12, I went through your portfolio because I think you're a really good author, and I want to read something good, so here it goes. It is early morning and ...

Holly, So, I really, really liked this poem. It has a great meaning and a great subject and you've managed to be vague enough to capture and hold my interest, ...

blackbird12, You have created a fantastic short story right here. I've been on the look for a good short story, and I clicked on this one because of it's intriguing ...

Kylan, Your first sentence can get rid of that comma, seeing as that last part is not a complete sentence. The air snug as surgeon's gloves snapped. I don't like ...

originalhobbit, Red stains on the carpet, contrasting brilliant white, the hands that left them, soaked with red, are begging to be cleaned. As with every piece of writing, you need ...

:( Youtube is blocked on my computer. Sadpanda. -Jared

Into the Margins April 4th TIM 04. small talk - what do you call yourselves? the strangers mingled with themselves quietly. the pistol's cold steel presses against my skin. - ...

Into the Margins April 3rd 03. ghost town the city tells me: come child, open my doors. but I know better. inferno lurk, hiding & watching my every step like ...

Into the Margins April 2nd 02. butterfly wings like golden butterfly wings, I flutter and stutter around the soft, blurred edges of perspective. flying and flitting, crying and spitting: these ...

Into the Margins April 1st MAY. 01. beginnings breathlessly endless seem the days of the darkness that chokes me. like a lid, it snaps the void --the thin void-- between ...

I'm writing a novel in poetry form. It's titled Into the Margins . It's not good, but I'm trying really hard. Maybe a few days in this month I won't ...