BigBadBear

The Mask Maker is a short story I'm writing before NaNo. It comes in little sections, so that is why this is short. What I'm focusing on here is description, ...

I've been here a year too! I completely forgot about it. :birthday: (YWS birthday, that is) -Jared

Who said that we aren't sick of you? O.o -Jared

Ooh! I smell a best-selling author! Really, though. This was fantastic. Incredible! I loved every second of this story, and I rarely do here on this site. You deserve a ...

Can we pleeeease keep Bartemius? He's my friend... -Jared

Snoink, Haha. Every time I read this, I start cracking up. This is the lamest contest critique I’ve ever given. >.< Thanks. It was just too funny to critique. And ...

Adnamarie, Hello, darling! I’m here on account of the contest that you entered! Well, I have to say that your main problem is realism here. Nothing in here seems real. ...

Chocoholic, Hello! I’m here because I’m going around and judging/critiquing all of the entries for my contest! I want to tell you that you did EXTREMELY well. You had the ...

Hey Cat-sama! I’m here because I’m judging the contest, and stuff, and so here I am! I’ve gone through and commented on a bunch of stuff. It’s not really too ...

P.S. I really want to know how you pronounce NaNoWriMo... I've been saying 'nano-wree-mo' but I'm sure I'm wrong. But 'nano-wry-mo' sounds weird... It's pronounced 'nano-wry-mo'... :) -Jared

So sorry to get to this so late. But, better late than never! And I wanted to do a really in-depth critique... >.< Fantastic, as always. I'm really falling in ...

The Amber Spyglass by Paul Pullman. -Jared

It reminds me of something set back in the 1800s, with a mysterious woman in white. Or I've been reading The Woman in White too much, lately.... The Novel House ...

I don't agree. I think it's easier with all of the separate forums for the readers, not for the writers. For instance, I don't like to read fantasy, or historical ...

bigbadbear93 is Jared!!! -Jared