BigBadBear

Double posting FTW. I might dress up as the Joker. Which is really cliché, but what the heck. -Jared

(The early bird get the worm.) -Jared

1/10. Wayyy too emo for me. Rate me on a scale of 1-10 on my Username. ;) -Jared

On November 1st, start posting your word counts! It's fun to see them rise. I'm going to post my wordcount every day. Well, get ready to write! It's only in ...

Haha. This made me laugh. :D The only stanza that didn't work for me is this one: In November I broke your cars. I ripped your drawings. And I told ...

Kylan, Hey, man! So. I thought that I had critiqued this, and I was right. I just never posted it. So sorry! Haha. Anyway, this was a very emotional piece, ...

Alrighty! I've just done Xxxdo's, so now I'm onto Scavenger (it's alright. I'll make an exception for you and anyone else who asks nicely) and then onto Mother. I can't ...

Hey, June! I randomly selected this from your portfolio! I really, really like this poem. It's simple, it's fragile, and it's innocent. I really like it. Okay. There's two things ...

Xxxdo, Rape is a very sensitive subject. I know that you know that. It’s something that’s so painful to remember and so dreadful, that people are haunted by it. That’s ...

Xxxdo, I’m going to be honest. I couldn’t even comprehend what the heck was happening in the first half of the story. You embellish this piece with so much unneeded ...

Hey, Penguin! I only have one critique on this, and I really need help with it. 5 stories for Cal's Contest -Jared

Hey, Heather! I only have one critique on this, and I really need help with it. 5 stories for Cal's Contest -Jared

Here's mine. I'm really fond of it. -Jared

I've written my five entries for Cal's contest! I need as much help as I can get with all of them, especially the second one. - 026. Lurk I clutched ...

Hello! [Shockingly] I could only find one thing that bugged me with this poem! And it's not even something major. The first letter of each line doesn't need to be ...