BigBadBear

Hi! My name's Jared, and I'm here to give you a quick little review of this piece. When young writers start out, they usually produce writing similar to this. Which ...

I could use some help with this? Please and thank you so very much! -Jared

I haven't written for a while, and this was on my mind. - First, the turbulence. Then the panicking. I distinctly remember the smell of fear in the plane. The ...

... talk about ironic. I didn't like this as much as I thought I would. In the beginning, I was so confused, but... for some reason, I think I liked ...

I think Fishy is a weirdy -Jared

Man, I gotta pee! ... -Jared

I think Snoink's a little bit on the nerdy side. XP -Jared

... I'm sick of looking at him every time I log onto YWS. :( He's worse than the Create Space guy. -Jared

Kylan, Running as fast a she can, branches scratching at her naked arms and raw pink cheeks. 'as', not 'a'. I read this sentence out loud and it's a little ...

I think I'm going to cry! -Jared

Lol. I use the same password for everything too. It's easier for me to remember what password goes to what. And, haha, my password doesn't follow any of those rules ...

Awwh, why doesn't Salt Lake City have more visits? :( -Jared

Hey, Sumi! A little boy nobody bothered to introduce to the class, he hung around during recess and watched me for a week or so. This sentence makes perfect sense, ...

Thank you all so much for your comments. I have a couple things to clear up though. “Brianne! Come through the window!” Jen cried from the other side of the ...

Hey, Sumi! I'm hungry for a great story, and of course, if it's written by you, I know it must be fantastic. Now... I'm a little worried. I haven't read ...