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Re: The Exorcism of Aphrodite
Hey, Kylan. I've always found your poems incredibly hard to critique, because I always thought that they were perfect because they were written so brilliantly. So, can I say that ...
Feb 3, 2009 -
Re: Into the Shack
Into The Shack At first, the shack seemed like it was nothing more than an abandoned building, with the windows boarded up and the roof caving in, but on inspection, ...
Jan 30, 2009 -
Re: 25 Random Things About Me
Eh, why not? 1. My favorite color is purple. 2. I don't like the colors red and black. 3. I am a horror freak. 4. I plan to read all ...
Jan 29, 2009 -
Re: Jared's Blog Contests
Hey, everyone. If you are looking to get back into some daily writing exercises, check out my Blog Contests . They are just short, every day challenges in my blog. ...
Jan 25, 2009 -
Re: Name Me Some Poets!
Edgar Allen Poe. Creepy, but amazing nonetheless. -Jared
Jan 24, 2009 -
Re: Pre-Algebra
3t + 5 --------- = -5 8 First thing you're going to do is multiply the 8 from the denominator (bottom number on a fraction and from the -5, because ...
Jan 23, 2009 -
Re: Mockingbird [pt. 2]
Hey! Sorry. I didn't forget about this, it's just I had other stuff to do. But now I'm here! ^_^ like dust blown off of old things. I do this ...
Jan 23, 2009 -
Re: Paradise Island (2)
I know exactly where I'm going with this story now! A lot of you guys mentioned how you felt kind of distant from the character, and that's what I was ...
Jan 21, 2009 -
Re: Mockingbird [pt. 1]
Hey, Kylan! You're right. I love horror stories! Buddy wakes up slowly. There is a musty taste in his mouth, and his jaw cracks open like the spine of a ...
Jan 21, 2009 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here [6]
lol, Jon, you're so weird. Haha, I love it. And your eyes are awesome! *steals* Here's one of me playing piano. My school picture. I like this one. Although... I ...
Jan 20, 2009 -
Re: Rydia's Reviews
Hey, Kitty! I was wondering if you could take a look at this? And if you have anything, send me the link to one of your pieces! I'd love to ...
Jan 20, 2009 -
Re: Paradise Island (1)
Thanks, Cat! I made those changes. I'll probably be posting some more tomorrow. I just need to edit the second portion up a bit. Thanks! Your comments are much appreciated. ...
Jan 20, 2009 -
Re: Mayella
Hi there! I'm Jared, and I'll be giving you a quick review. Sometimes the emptiness of it hurt my eyes. Not all the time. I love your opening sentence. It ...
Jan 20, 2009 -
Re: My Guardian Angel................ Prologue
Hi there! I'm Jared, and I'll be giving you a short critique for this story prologue. I have to say that this plot has been done a million times? But... ...
Jan 20, 2009 -
Re: Giving Up
Hey, Cat! I don't think I've read anything of yours. >.< I'm a failure of a friend. “Sissy?” Ella asked. Ella was my younger sister of eight years with golden ...
Jan 20, 2009
