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Re: Field Trip Part 2
The bus driver held up a big bucket in his hands. “If you choose not to cooperate, I will be forced to shoot and kill you.” I gasped. My cell ...
Oct 7, 2007 -
Re: Hey! I'm new here!
Wow! Haha! This site is 'fabulous!' I can't believe that everyone likes me...its amazing! Anyway to answer your question, Inkster, I like to write myster, horror and adventure, because I ...
Oct 7, 2007 -
Re: Hey! I'm new here!
Oh my gosh.. haha! You're funny. Anyway, I really like just...idk.. soft rock? Not really into screamo and stuff... I have written an orchestra piece of music for my school ...
Oct 7, 2007 -
Re: Part of my book... maybe?
I don't think that you introduced them too much, cause who says that you can't explain them more later, after all of this affair? This story totally grabbed me from ...
Oct 7, 2007 -
Re: The Red Road Home
Hey! Great Subject! I really liked how it caught me when you said "a corpse" Anyway, I was a little confused when I read the next part, and it went ...
Oct 7, 2007 -
Re: Field Trip Part 1
Ok! Ty! I will be sure to change that! Ty for your comments and stuff!!!
Oct 7, 2007 -
Re: Soooooo....
Howdy to you, can I call you Jimmy Zendrix? Gawsh, I crack myself up sometimes. ^^ This site is pretty fun if I'm honest and it's like - whoa everyone ...
Oct 7, 2007 -
Re: Hey! I'm new here!
[pre]Hey! I am new here and I just want to get a feel for this website! As far as I can tell, everyone here has been just fabulous. They have ...
Oct 7, 2007 -
Re: Field Trip Part 1
There was a headline in the newspaper on October 7th, 2006: Killer Bus Driver! This morning, shortly around 7:30 am, a bus suddenly disappeared when it was supposed to arrive ...
Oct 7, 2007 -
Re: Field Trip
Okay, I will do it in sections, cuz it is really 14pgs typed...Thanks a lot!!!!!
Oct 7, 2007 -
Re: Field Trip
Hey! This is me again... I'm sorry about the text... I don't know how to fix it, but I'll be sure that it wont happen again!!!
Oct 7, 2007 -
Re: Field Trip
[pre]Hey! I'm new here, and I just wanted to get a general opinion on my short stories that I write. This is just the very beginning of my story. Everything ...
Oct 7, 2007 -
Re: A War Worth Fighting For
Heya! I loved this little section because it totally grabbed me from the beginning. Almost like at the second or third paragraph, I had a clear picture of the setting ...
Oct 7, 2007 -
Re: the circle that never ends
Hey! Great poem! It really expressed the girl's feelings toward the guy. I don't think that it needs any puncuation or anything, it is just a great poem all in ...
Oct 7, 2007 -
Re: Jerrsea'ya: Wind of death part I
Wow! That is amazing! I really like the idea that you have, and you have creative names and things. You are really creative, and I can't wait to read the ...
Oct 7, 2007
