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Re: Hiya!
Hey! You have like a great bio. Lol. What kind of things do you like to write? I mean, like romance, thrillers, ect... I am very interested in you, and ...
Oct 14, 2007 -
Re: I'm With Mother
Awwwww... i feel like I am going to cry.. That was a perfect poem in every way. The ending made me feel happy, but yet sad. Great job! bigbadbear
Oct 14, 2007 -
Re: Beautifully Evil a novel
Hey guys. I know that you are anxious to find out what happens, but I don't put every little detail in here so that you will keep guessing. If I ...
Oct 13, 2007 -
Re: Beautifully Evil a novel
Prologue It was in the dead of night. Friday, October 13,1995. A masked murderer silently broke through a glass window of a Los Angeles mansion. No one heard anything. The ...
Oct 13, 2007 -
Re: The Gifted and the Cursed Part Two
“Ahhhh! When are they gonna let us in! I’m gonna die!” Race shouted. A couple of girls looked over at Race when he yelled and giggled. Race blushed and smiled ...
Oct 13, 2007 -
Re: Tommy's Gift, Billy's Regret
Wow! Freaky, and scary! Very cool! There are a couple things I wanted to point out: 1. Today only 5 years later, Tara was still wishing Billy would come back ...
Oct 11, 2007 -
Re: Beautiful Disaster
Hey! Good job. There was a few grammeratical stuff and spelling that I will point out. 1. I put my hand on my mouth to stop the bile rising in ...
Oct 11, 2007 -
Re: The Gifted and the Cursed: Super-Kids In Training
Chapter One “It’s too hot!” said an eleven-year-old boy. His thirteen-year-old brother nodded his head in agreement. “Yeah, if it is too hot, then we don’t have to go to ...
Oct 11, 2007 -
Re: Do Not Read This Story
Oh my gosh! That was the stranges thing I have read in years! Who ever knew that the pot could cure almost anything? Oh gosh, this was halirious! You should ...
Oct 11, 2007 -
Re: Tandem Writing
I will do it!!!!!!! I love that kind of writing! Just tell me when and where!
Oct 8, 2007 -
Re: Field Trip Part 3
The bus driver swore very loudly and hit the steering wheel in frustration. The bus honked. He stood up, and pulled out his gun. “It looks like this is where ...
Oct 8, 2007 -
Re: The Journey To Wolf Mountain (chapter one)
The only thing that bothered me here was that I think you should put the letters that he recieved in italics. It will make it more noticable. And I was ...
Oct 8, 2007 -
Re: A Game to Play #1
Wow! This is a great story! I really like how you described the charactors using humor and things like that. Well, to make a long story short, I agree with ...
Oct 8, 2007 -
Re: The Tyran Menace
Ok, the only main problem I had with it was that it went by to fast, and as soon as I was done reading it, I was like, "Oh...What?" There ...
Oct 8, 2007 -
Re: Field Trip Part 1
Hey! Thanks, guys, for reviewing my stuff. And the part about the cell phones and Ipods...they were taken away because the kids could call the police with phones, and I ...
Oct 8, 2007
