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Re: Beautifully Evil #2
Just try and picture something hard and difficult that you have to do... I was picturing like getting hit and whipped with a belt and stuff, and yeah.. stuff like ...
Oct 16, 2007 -
Re: The Gifted and the Cursed
Chapter Two Race woke up to a deafening BANG! Startled, he bolted up from his bed and screamed. Jared continued to snore, and Zachary, in the bed below Jared didn’t ...
Oct 16, 2007 -
Re: Truthseeker: Prologue
Whoa... awesome! I don't agree that it was bland.. In fact, it was awesome! It grabbed my by surprise, and it really makes you wonder what the heck is going ...
Oct 16, 2007 -
Re: Beautifully Evil #2
No, not rape... What father would rape their child? Anyway, I don't know what she had to go through, but let's just say that it wasn't fun.
Oct 16, 2007 -
Re: A vampire's attempt at revenge.
Hey! I forgot to mention that the whole transe scene when the main girl can't control her words are cool. Keep at it!!! BBB
Oct 16, 2007 -
Re: Beautifully Evil #2
Chapter two Mary sighed. She had been watching Christian talk to that stupid preppy girl. I think Christy-Ann is her name. She frowned and turned to walk back home. She ...
Oct 16, 2007 -
Re: Werewolves!
Hey! I saw a post about vampires, and it inspired me to write about a werewolf! How cool is that? No one has written about werewolves! ~_~ So... um... what ...
Oct 16, 2007 -
Re: Vampires
Oh wow, I have been waiting for something like this for a long time. I really think that only SOME vampires can turn into bats. That would be cool. Like ...
Oct 16, 2007 -
Re: The Walkers
Hey! This is a good start; very intriguing. There was only a couple of things that I noticed, and I'll point them out. The guards flipped a switch, and now ...
Oct 15, 2007 -
Re: Beautifully Evil #1
Yeah, I took it from the action/adventure to the romance.. Sorry about that
Oct 15, 2007 -
Re: Beautifully Evil #1
Chapter one It was the start of the new school year in 2005. Highschoolers shuffled around to find their new classes in their school, Midvale High. It was a typical ...
Oct 15, 2007 -
Re: A vampire's attempt at revenge.
Ok, good. This story better not be over. I mean... come on! Gosh, it was so flippin good. There were somethings about it that I didn't like. Rushed. It felt ...
Oct 15, 2007 -
Re: Trinity
Oh my gosh. That was the coolest thing I have read all day. Besides the two things that I found, there was nothing wrong with it 1. I nodded, the ...
Oct 15, 2007 -
Re: What do you like to see in a book?
Hey Jassie! Well, I really think that to make this story really interesting is to add a ton of voice and humor! I mean, it would be a pretty boring ...
Oct 15, 2007 -
Re: The Stranded
Hey guys! I know that this is like the most stupid and random play you have ever read, but hey, I wrote this for a scout thing once to get ...
Oct 15, 2007
