BigBadBear

Chapter Six Mary whimpered in pain. She limped slowly to her room and slammed the door, despite her father’s cursing and swear words. She had just suffered another painful beating, ...

Wow. You continue to freak me out. I can't wait to keep reading. Well, at the very last part where it said that you have reached the devil, I thought ...

hey! I wrote this in 7th grade for a creative writing assingment, and it is stupid, but funny. You know, it was all Dr. Drawson’s fault that the bugs attacked ...

Chapter five “Kill him? What do you mean, kill him? I have to murder someone?” Christian spat out. Christian felt totally resentful to the job, but still, he was interested ...

That day really scared me. Was I really to die in one day? Who would have done such a thing? Why would they go that far to scare me? I ...

OH MY GOSH! That was the FREAKIEST chapter I have ever read! I cannot believe it! You put it exactly the way a reader wants it, to the point and ...

Yes, my dreams are to get published, and who wouldn't want it to be a best seller? I wouldn't really mind one way or another, just as long as people ...

hey! This is my first time doing Nano...partly because I have only just heard of it, and I decided, hey, I will do this. I will take this challenge and ...

Hm...the bunny...It's creative.. I'll give it a 9.

When Mother died, it was a tragic year for all of us. We had known that she was destined to die in the early weeks of January, but she departed ...

Chapter Four Christian made his way toward the dark alley once again, in search of that strange man. Christian was so full of rage and emotion, he didn’t care about ...

Hey! It is a great story, but I am not sure what you mean by when you said you need help ending and beginning a paragraph. Do you mean like ...

Chapter three Christian was disappointed that John had shown up at that time. Christy-Ann and I were having a great discussion, and he had to blow it! Christian was walking ...

Hey! I am new here and I have been reading through all of this Nano stuff... what the heck does it mean? I mean what is the point? It seems ...

Hey! Great script. Like kitty said, your charactors sure had lots of good dialoge and it was just great! I like the idea of a 'more than pefect, but yet ...